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Emma Francis
Sep 18, 2024
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Pigeon shit filled the alley.

Pigeon shit shoved its smell down our noses.

Pigeon poop forced its way down our noses, filling our bodies, until it exited through our mouths as breath. 

The alleyway smelled of pigeon poop that forced its path down our noses, filling our bodies, until it extended through our mouths as breath. 

The alleyway smelled of pigeon p…

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